Sunday, 27 April 2008
At Port Stowe
Mr. Marvel was quietly sitting on a bench when suddenly a seaman came up to him and started talking curious things he heard about the invisible man. After much thought, Mr. Marvel decided to tell him what he knew about the invisible man. Few minutes later, the invisible man came back from going round the town stealing money. Sadly, he needs something to helo him cover his money so that people won't know about the money.
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"Started talking curious things" sounds a big awkward.
You should also saw "A few minutes later."
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